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time is running quickly
into bowls, into bottles
and into the words this led writes.
There isnt enough breath left
I can give you to understand.
My own breaths are short and
Im walking away
into empty eyes with
blank stares.
Rushed and cold love
in the last burning of
sweet cigarettes
breed distinct addictions.
Im using tricks and ploys
to find uncertaintiy within me.
Confusion is unsettling
yet easily comforting.
I recognize distant hope
falling form your lips
and I eagerly taste it
as a simple reminder
of who I was once
and what I once wanted,
where I once stood
Seemingly alone but
always surrounded by warm hands.
Knowing now,
I am a lie.
©2006-2009 ~undressed917
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I wrote this up in Vermont when I was there for a writers conference...
Im a confused girl...

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you write beautifully.


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Regrets and Romance.



|Remember me whenever noses start to bleed|
:iconundressed917:
thank you :)

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you told me you wanted me to go with you...i still would go anywhere you wanted </3
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I reali like it, its like everthing goin on in your head in a split second, before you forget what you were thinking. Well done! xo

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